My Fortunately, Unfortunately story :
Fortunately one day Ben was invited to a birthday
party.
Unfortunately the birthday party was in Auckland and he was
In Hamilton.
Fortunately he took a bus that went to Auckland.
Unfortunately the bus broke down while on the motorway.
Fortunately he got out the bus and started walking on the
motorway.
Unfortunately police caught him walking on the motorway
and had to escort him back.
Fortunately he told the police that he had to go to a birthday
in Auckland.
Unfortunately the police were still thinking about escorting
Back to Hamilton.
Fortunately the bus was fixed, nice and ready.
Unfortunately the bus was far away so he had to run.
Fortunately he managed to get on the bus.
Unfortunately he was late to the party.
Fortunately the bus made it to Auckland and he
Also made it to the party - even though he was late he had a
great time
The End
Well Done Helen, I really enjoyed reading your writing.
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Great piece of writing Helen. I like how imaginative it is. It was great that you shared this with the class as it has inspired others to do the activity and use their imaginations as well.
ReplyDeleteHaha this was an awesome story Helen. Very funny! Are you going to keep writing in the holidays?
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